仔細觀察下面的圖畫，然后解釋每一幅圖畫所代表的意義，并合理預測煙草未來銷售的情況，說明你的理由：
二、學生習作
We meet smokers everywhere. There are 5.8 billion people in the world, and there are① about 1.2 billion of them are smokers, which make up to 20 percent of the world's total population.
Smoking is very harmful. First, smoking costs a great number② of money. It wastes 200 billion dollars each year in the world. Second, smoking does harm to the health of smokers and even the people near them. About 3 million people die of disease③ caused by smoking every year.
Luckily, more and more people have come to realize the great harm of smoking. To our delight the total amount of world tobacco production have④ dropped from over 14 billion pounds in 2000 to 7 billion pounds in 2003. It is sure⑤ that the number of smokers will farther⑥ decrease gradual⑦.
三、修改說明
�、僭摼錇殡p謂語錯誤句型，應去掉there are。②money為不可數(shù)名詞，number應改為deal。③吸煙所造成的疾病較多，disease應改為diseases。④主語amount為不可數(shù)名詞，作主語動詞應用單數(shù)，have應改為has。⑤sure不可用于主語從句，應改為certain。⑥此處表進一步的，應用further而不可用farther。⑦decrease為行為動詞，應用副詞修飾，gradual應改為gradually。
四、參考答案
We meet smokers everywhere. There are 5.8 billion people in the world, and about 1.2 billion of them are smokers, which make up to 20 percent of the world's total population.
Smoking is very harmful. First, smoking costs a great deal of money. It wastes 200 billion dollars each year in the world. Second, smoking does harm to the health of smokers and even the people near them. About 3 million people die of diseases caused by smoking every year.
Luckily, more and more people have come to realize the great harm of smoking. To our delight the total amount of world tobacco production has dropped from over 14 billion pounds in 2000 to 7 billion pounds in 2003. It is certain that the number of smokers will further decrease gradually.
五、點評
本篇書面表達習作為看圖作文，符合高考英語書面表達寫作新要求。And, First, Second, Luckily, To our delight等過渡性詞匯的使用增加了文章的連貫性、邏輯性和可讀性。首句的警示作用和末句的激勵作用號召人民在戒煙問題上既要有緊迫感又要有充分的信心。up to, even等情感性副詞的使用能喚醒人們對吸煙危害的關注，具有強烈的感染性。非限制性定語從句、過去分詞作定語、主語從句等高級表達方式的運用提升了文章的表達檔次。但本文也存在一些不足之處，出現(xiàn)了雙謂語錯誤、易混詞誤用錯誤、名詞單復數(shù)錯誤、主謂語一致錯誤、形容詞副詞混用錯誤等�！ �
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