I have happy family, it is my father, my mother and me.
　　My father is very fat, he is a civil servant, he works very hard.. Father is very funny, put my family very happy. I’m very happy.
　　My mother is very thin, she is civil servant, too. She is a good cooker, she cooks food for everybody. She is quiet, and she likes books and swimming.
　　I’m a little girl in the family, maybe I’ll be a writer. I like hamburger, chips, books, swim 初中歷史.
　　This is my happy family!
　　評語：Very good!This is a good speech!今天有了很大的進步，繼續(xù)努力！只要你用心寫，也可以寫出很多的，繼續(xù)加油！要開心一點，心情好了就可以學得更好！

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